Wednesday, June 9, 2010

PATRIOTISM ANDREA GUERRA

I STAND ON HISTORY'S CORNER


I once was called a State House, now I'm Independence Hall

I stand on history's corner on a Philadelphia mall

I face the green where freedom rings in silence to the ear

But the bell tolls daily in the minds of those who want to hear



In the chambers of my meeting place, two hundred years ago

Words of strong debate from out my chambers overflowed

A government was founded and a portrait finely etched

And the face of freedom's guarantee on parchment had been sketched



I listened to the arguments, I heard the strong debate

I shed a tear of joy when they discussed the people's fate

They granted all a freedom that nobody could refute

The right to speak what he believed was granted absolute



It is a freedom that's denied to millions on this earth

Yet many here still don't appreciate its' golden worth

For every freedom guaranteed, there rests a certain trust

In the right of conscience, right of thought, to say the things we must



Every day the tourists come, to visit chamber halls

To hear the words of independence echo off the walls

They glance out rippled windows at the beauty of the green

Some understand the magnitude of all that they have seen



There is an unmarked boundary by which speech is well embraced

That does not smile upon the words that scar and that deface

That offend another's tenants, that degrade and that abuse

From one without a conscience, where his freedom is misused



But yet between the lines of freedom, tolerance is clear

Sometimes we listen to the things we never want to hear

Then anger and mistrust arise within the murky mist

Of one who utters or displays what principles resist



But yet he has the right to what his conscience will attest

To those I say, just turn your back and silently protest

Rejection is the deepest pain that one will ever feel

And silence speaks the loudest as it echoes what is real



There is another boundary that blows in freedom's air

That does not allow the right to speech that cause s one's despair

Inciting danger or upheaval, with a word or sign

Intended to create despair and others to malign



The law will call to justice, the one who oversteps

The line of freedom's limits with the weight of ignorance

Those who've passed the boundaries, marked on wooden floor

Where freedom was first granted, never walked into my door



For if he had, he would be overcome with the debate

As ghosts of freedom argue in the favor of his fate

He'd hear his name be mentioned as deserving to the wise

For "every individual" was equal in their eyes



He'd understand the privilege of living in a land

Where censorship's forbidden to the eyes of every man

Where every pen is free to write the thoughts within his soul

And every soul is free in seeking knowledge as his goal



I stand on history's corner, a building with a name

Where people look at freedom's bell through rippled window pane

And realize their eyes are gazing through the very glass

Of eyes that once looked out as well in shadows of the past



Come here to see where freedom's voice was duly given birth

Come here to understand the measure of your voice's worth



-- Submitted by Elizabeth Santos from Pottstown, PA

e-mail: mesantos1@comcast.net

Got Your Back


by Autumn Parker



I am a small and precious child,

my Daddys been sent to fight

The only place I will see his face,

is in my dreams at night



He will be gone too many days,

for my young mind to keep track.

I may be sad, but I am proud,

my Daddy's got your back



I am a caring mother,

my son has gone to war

My mind is filled with worries

that I have never known before



Every day I try to keep

my thoughts from turning black

I may be sad, but I am proud,

my son has got your back.



I am a strong and loving wife,

with a husband soon to go

There are times I am terrified,

in ways most never know



I bite my lip and force a smile,

as I watch my husband pack

My heart may break but I am proud,

my husband's got your back.



I am a soldier;

serving proudly, standing tall.

I fight for freedom, yours and mine,

by answering this call.



I do my job while knowing,

the thanks it sometimes lacks.

Say a prayer that I come home,

its me that's got your back



A M E R I C A


A

is for the Attitudes

that conquer any quest

M

is for the Multitudes

who know just why they're blessed

E

pluribus unum

from sea to shining sea

R

for all the Riches found

where everyone is free

I

for Individuals

who sacrifice their all

C

because our Christian faith

will answer every call, so one more

A

for Attitudes

That live inside of us

God has blessed America

Cause God is who we trust



G O D B L E S S A M E R I C A !

7 comments:

  1. In this poem, different point of views are presented about dealing with patriotism. People suffer so that we can be free. we must be thankful.

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  2. [comment on "Got your back"] It's nice to read in this one poem various feelings. In the various circumstances, it shows that anyone can feel proud about a loved one in the armed forces. I especially like when it becomes the voice of a soldier, because it reflects how strong he (or she) is. It must not only take someone strong, and truly passionate, to take on the job of a soldier, but also to deal with having a loved one as a soldier.

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  3. im commenting on the second poem. ummm i llike the fact that the poet moves down the line of people that will miuss this soldier and he does it very smoothly. it goes to show that the people a soldier leaves behind has to have some patriotism as well to let their loved ones go into a war not knowing if their going to come back or not

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  4. The Got Your Back poem is very nice in the sense that it does show two different point of views. One of the views is the soldier himself and what he feels with his/her job of being a soldier and the other point of view is that of a loved one and how he feels when their soldier is leaving to do his job. I feel this poem illustrates very well how not only are soldiers patriots, but the loved ones need to be patriots as well dealing with this...

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  5. The poem about how the slodier has your back relates to me. My dad is in afghanistan for a year and i think about him possibly not coming home all the time. The rhyme scheme and word choice is simple but its not elementary.

    "He will be gone too many days,

    for my young mind to keep track.

    I may be sad, but I am proud,

    my Daddy's got your back" This is my favorite stanza. ALhtough i am not a small child anymore i still miss my daddy.

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  6. [Comment on Got your back]
    I think this poem has a very nice flow which makes it easy to read and enjoy. each pair of stanzas has the same structure... the first stanza introduces somebody who is affected by having a loved one at war and goies on to portray the fear of losing that loved one. Furthermore, the second stanza of the pair introduces the pride and the reason for the sacrifrice.
    I think it is also important to look at the message of this poem, which is to not forget who has our backs and the sacrifice that those people and there families make for this country.
    Also i will like to add that the repetion of the tittle works very well in adding a rhythm to the poem.

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  7. I must say it is a long time since i seen the last poem which uses the letters of a word to set its structure but in its simplistic and beautiful it does a great job of reely getting down to the core of america with a nice rhyme scheme on top of that

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